Dark Scorpion + Zombie world ?!

Dark Scorpion - Melanie the Thron x3
Dark Scorpion - Chick the Yellow x2
Dark Scorpion - Gorg the Strong x2
Cliff the Trap remover x3
Don Zaloog x3
Zombie Master x3
Immortal Ruler
Mezuki
Ryko x2

Spells
Zombie World x3
Book of Life x3
Over Powering eye x3
Mustering of the Dark Scorpions x3
Heavy

Traps
Solemn
Torrential
Bottomless x2
Robbin Goblin x2
Dark Scorpion Combination x2

this deck isnt meant to be competitive its just for fun the main stragie is to get zombie world on the field and have over powering eye with atleast a scorpion on the field with robbin goblin then i cann attack directly discard a card & mild or the other effect ; dark scopion combination is just so i can attack directly to set off thier effects ; the others are just stapples well rate & constructive critisisum pleasee

A plag zombie won't damage the deck.
Also Allure and Dark armed dragon are a must here.

yeahh i think i'll add them in thanks

If you say its for fun its pretty nice id rate it a 8.5/10

well, the deck can be pretty competetive,can't really think of any fixes XD, though about addeding some "command knights"?, hope i helped, gl, and keep up the good work !!